Swarovski Sterling

Swarovski Sterling

Can someone please edit this sentence for a business card - 10 points to first correct helpful answer!?

Ok, I am making a business card and I am trying to write a sentence for the card which is similar to the sentence below.... ( as it is an internet based business I will not have my address, just phone number, name, email and website down the bottom - so this sentence will be the main part of the card in the middle)

Original one of a kind hand crafted jewellery including
salt & fresh water pearls, glass beads, swarovski crystals, wire wrapping, vintage pieces, scrabble tile jewellery, sterling silver & 14kt gold fill, as well as sterling silver mens and womens jewellery from Italy + much more.

To me is seems a bit long, BUT I cant seem to get it any shorter without missing out any vital bits of info.

Can someone please tell me wether words like swarovski crystals should have capitals, if I have commas in the right places and just generally edit or re word it so it is grammatically correct...

THANKS

Original, one-of-a-kind, hand-crafted jewelry. Sale items incl. salt & fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, Scrabble tile jewelry, sterling silver & 14kt gold fill, as well as men's & women's jewelry. Vintage pieces, incl. many from Italy and more..

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